My concience screams at me...
...to let go...
but i will not...
my heart takes over my head...
my hands strain harder...
my teeth are clenched...
his nails pierce my skin....
his scream rips through the damp air....
his sweaty grip slips....
once..
twice..
until his hand is finally free...
i feel dizzy and shriek as....
my world comes crashing down...
he goes crashing down...
into the lifeless darkness....
of...
nothing.
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2 comments:
Great I LoVE it!
It uses great rythem.
Perhaps you could consider making the last to lines one but other than that...BRILLIANT
Very sweet I love it
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