There it sits, just out of my sight,
It’s a runaway dream…
For a moment it pauses, in the light,
It’s a runaway dream…
I know it is there, yet it is unseen,
It’s a runaway dream…
I think I see it, it starts to preen,
It’s a runaway dream…
My heart starts to beat, I stumble around,
It’s a runaway dream…
I lie there, defeated, on the ground,
That runaway dream…
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6 comments:
stunning- again!
thank you ms candy!!!!!!!!!!!! much apreciated
Brilliant!!!!
Its a runnaway dream!
Bueatiful...the only thing I would consider changing is just the
My heart starts to beat, I stumble to the ground
It’s a runaway dream…
I lie there, defeated, on the ground,
That runaway dream…
you reapeated the word 'ground' which drops some of the origional rhythem.
GREAT JOB!
Thank you kitty kat, i wll change it to, 'stumble around'
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